For the “One Million Cups” video presentation, I watched the
pitch from the “Rally
Makers” and “Live Music Tour.” Rally
Makers works with charities to make a sustaining impact into the community. One of the components of the company was to collaborate
with organizations and mentor them. This
gentleman had a well-prepared presentation.
He seemed to be comfortable throughout the presentation and was able to
present without any note cards. He
always made sure to engage with the crowd by making eye contact. Visually, I feel he should have used a PowerPoint
slide. He did a great job of drawing
what the business was about, but I am not sure that everyone was able to
clearly see it. This could lead to the
audience not fully understanding your business.
Next time I recommend using the projector screen. As far as the business, I feel it is important
to build more of a presence. The
presenter stated that if you want to get updates on the company follow them on
social media “because they are not great at telling folks.” Some investors are older and not involved in
social media, it is important to consider all potential clients.
Live Music Tutor was in the business of being an online
music tutor. They offered lessons on
playing various instruments along with vocal training. The speaker was well prepared, he was very
comfortable and the presentation was clear and informative. He began the presentation with a brief video description
of the company and incorporated key information such as revenue streams, key
partners and services offered. Although
he did a great job, there were areas I felt he could have improved. The presenter had a stack of papers in his
hand that were a distraction during his presentation; he also used the podium
to lean on. I suggest keeping his hands
free next time and not leaning on the podium. For the business, I suggest giving a trial
session before making the customer commit.
This allows the customer to see if this is something they really want,
and allow them to test the connection.
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